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Dan Arbor - 2005-02-17 11:49:39
There is poetry in falling snow...
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Laura - 2005-02-17 11:53:30
There sure is. It has a funny effect, also, of making one suddenly feel connected to the whole universe because it fills the invisible air, and the steadily smaller-looking flakes farther and farther off all around you draw your eye off into infinity.
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YD - 2005-02-17 13:44:03
There may be poetry in falling snow, but if you have to shovel it for eight hours there is pain as well.
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Laura - 2005-02-17 13:47:51
Indeed. But for eight hours--phew. I had 40 minutes of driveway shoveling during that last big snow & that was pretty tiring. It's hard work.
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Dan Arbor - 2005-02-17 14:16:42
gentle flakes of verse
transform in flight to become
dense as heavy tomes

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Laura - 2005-02-17 14:28:35
infatuation
falls slowly from a great height
to end as wet weight
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yd - 2005-02-17 15:30:47
The feathery flakes gather like a great army, till I must dipose of the masses. And my groin hurts for days.
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LF - 2005-02-17 17:37:33
crystalline vapors their beauty ephemeral herniated disk
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LF - 2005-02-17 17:41:52
crystalline vapors
their beauty ephemeral
herniated disk
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Laura - 2005-02-17 18:43:37
Cobwebbed in crawl space
she tickles sleeping dragon
white drifts slowly rise
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yd - 2005-02-18 11:32:39
I am a spider In the crawlspace of life Sucking fly brains for sustenance. Sticky strands of web Ooze from my being. And capture the dust In the windmills of my mind
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Laura - 2005-02-18 13:02:02
furnace repairer
looks down to see tiny rug
flat, grey, stringy tail
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Laura - 2005-02-18 13:06:01
It's a new poetry genre. The Crawl Space Movement. Of course, there's not much movement to be had in a crawl space. So I guess it's a fairly minor movement. At any rate.
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